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Launch teardown: pocketty

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Sources (public)

What the public pages say:

What the HN thread raised (paraphrased):


1. Teardown

Working:

What we'd change:

  1. Answer "$99 for what?" in one line above the fold. The value is spread across eight sections. Lead with the outcome: "Leave your desk. Your agents still reach you, and nobody else can read the alert."
  2. Lead with the paternity-leave story on launch day. It's in the HN post but not on the site. People remember a story longer than a feature list.
  3. Make the herdr dependency clear before people install. The first bug report was a herdr detection issue. A "Works with herdr X.Y+ / without herdr you get plain SSH" line plus a troubleshooting link would head that off.
  4. Have a short, kind answer ready for "free alternative exists." Differentiate on sealed notifications and the native Pane view. Don't knock the free project.
  5. The price change is a deadline. Use it calmly. "Launch price $99 until [date], then $129" (only with a real date).

7. Hero rewrite

Full sample kit (Product Hunt set, X thread, Show HN notes): read it here.


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